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Open Poetry #25

Will You

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-02-18 02:32 PM

Will You

I think I'm
going to die
if we don't
make love.

How long
will you
make me wait?

You know
what I want.

I'm fading fast.

You won't
let me die.

Will you?

JamesLee
February16
2003

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-18 02:33 PM

I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

crazy4u
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 67

2 posted 2003-02-18 02:34 PM

a little hasty aren't we?? but i loved it

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-02-18 02:51 PM

(laughing)... sounds like you got it bad bud... hope she says soon...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-02-18 04:57 PM

Thank you the loner, crazy4u and Cpat for responding...yeah I hope she hurrys cause I'm fading fast...James

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