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Open Poetry #25

Snowbound

That Voice
Junior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-02-17 05:07 AM

The snow blows the edges off the world
A white night will waken to slay the rush hour
Unable incapable to meet what is hurled
That slows
~no goes
~~stopped by white dragon’s power

Toil and work takes a holiday
Till plows come rolling this way

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2003-02-17 06:39 AM

I'd like to be snowbound right now, or anyplace that's wet. Visual poem.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2003-02-17 10:03 PM

this poem was great.

this line was especially witty:

A white night will waken to slay the rush hour

i just love that.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-17 10:05 PM

beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

4 posted 2003-02-17 10:39 PM

I AM snowbound right now. More romantic when you are not alone though hahaha...Gotta WALK to work. But a wonderful poem in dedication to our wonderous white "night"

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-02-18 05:00 PM

Ahh the white beauty!
The silence inspired you!
Margherita

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

6 posted 2003-02-18 05:40 PM

Witty, clever...well written. Can visualize a snow plow blasting down a back road...heading to your place!

Rf

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