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pk Junior Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 23 |
Alone I awaken This world now a prison I picture you Surrounded by thoughts of original sin And ask to be forgiven But it is cloudy today And Gods lost in other things So my heart melts again Knowing she was the one for me I can only sink Let her go please No! shes my destiny My faith My belief Is it not better to die Then to compound thy sin With thoughts that cannot be False loyalty Perhaps i can get her back! Don't be silly You left here once Never to be forgiven "Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking" |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad. But it is well written and I like it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this reminds me of the scene in Romeo and Juliet, as they compare kissing to sin. Enjoyed, though painful Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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pk Junior Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 23 |
thanks for the reply. The poem was inspired after reading Thomas Hardy's "Tess of the D'Ubervilles". It is a very good book. "Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking" |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
enjoyed this very much |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
very well written |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yeah, mon, haven't we all been through that! Remembering Penny/Janice/Donna/Gisela/Susan/Pat/Deanna/......... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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