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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
A wet red couch A velvet that began to harden The papers were everywhere A mess was the entire place There lay a figure On the floor of red oak Shards of glass kept Her company while she cried It had been sudden A flurry of action everywhere She hadn't see his face And it was just as well Her husband had left her Abandoned would be the word After days of crying What greeted her but shame She struggled now To grasp the vine To live, to live a life Than to die a shameful death Red covered all And wet it was too She stopped crying As pain sent her away. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a bleak portrait... for the loss of hope...this seems the ultimate. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well written! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminds me of when I went through my divorce...lots of pain and crying...and finally acceptance...James |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
My sympathies with you James CD |
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