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Chelsea
Junior Member
since 2003-03-28
Posts 10
Oregon, USA

0 posted 2003-03-28 09:02 PM


after it all I realized that I have a naive heart
I should have seen the end before the start
I felt too much
I was fooled by his tender touch
love isn't a toy
and it certainly cannot be given by a boy
one day I'll be grown and mature
and will find someone to truly care for and nurture
until that time in my life
when I can proudly call myself someone's wife
I'll fall and get myself back up before its too late
because he's waiting for me out there
all I have to do is search for the
opening of the gate

© Copyright 2003 Chelsea Maureen French - All Rights Reserved
Dance
Junior Member
since 2003-03-28
Posts 34

1 posted 2003-03-28 09:33 PM


Nice. good form and easy to define.
You really let us know how you feel and that is great! @}--`--

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-03-29 12:27 PM


Love is not a signed piece of paper, or a bed of roses.

The gate will open and you'll know when it's right to pass through.

In the meantime tread lightly and tend to your heart.

Nice to read you Chelsea and *welcome*  

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