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Dance Junior Member
since 2003-03-28
Posts 34 |
My world is spinning out of control, I don’t understand how, or where to go. The longer I think, the faster it spins, out of control. I don’t know what to do, my heart is lost without you. My world is sinking beneath the mud, slowly oozing and thinking , “What a dud”. I don’t understand, what is going on. Am I naïve, am I to young? Is there something going on, that you think I need to be protected from? Or am I, slowly but surely, going insane over the same freakishly odd game? Are you hiding information I need to know, So possibly my mind will never grow? Guess what. The more you hide from your fears and mine, our worlds will explode, just give them some time. I don’t understand why you are doing this to me, Is it something that you hold deep to your heart so I won’t peek? Is it a surprise, good or bad? Is it the news that I never had? Please tell me soon before my world meets its doom. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Dance, I really enjoyed the read of this. It's very nicely done, and just swirling with emotions. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-29-2003 12:28 AM).] |
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