Open Poetry #25 |
Tremblings |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Tremblings Most bare and offered tenderly but shred a sleeping tigers numb Withdrawn to sob so humbly, into deep slumbers arms succumb In solitary respite calms the sting of disbelief, a core bled burn Withdrawn the shocks and lashes of what love has left to learn For time the thorough teacher and time the healing art Withdrawn to caves of disbelief, secluded days in jigsaw part Into the cool clean waters well the silent spirit sounds Withdrawn and kept to stitching well enough a life rebounds Upon a pipers note by far, sent music to the spirits ears Withstood and cherished tenderly, as once again the body hears In trance like states of willow fates the destiny of dreams Most bare and offered tenderly a leathered feel it seems Copyright Kkh 3/28/03 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Upon a pipers note by far, sent music to the spirits ears Withstood and cherished tenderly, as once again the body hears In trance like states of willow fates the destiny of dreams Most bare and offered tenderly a leathered feel it seems" ========================================== Most beautiful Kathleen... Very beautiful rhythm..and dreamlike quality. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Wonderfully done! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very beautiful! Eric |
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