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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
These... You hide it so well I don't know If you'll even tell These secrets These lies I'm scared to ask if all I see is just a mask These pains These cries I say I love you something that you know Do you love me is all you have to show These laughs These sighs Day by day Night by night I long to see your gorgeous sight These sunsets These blue skies I would die for you Would you even cry for me? These tears These fears All I want is is love in return; That's something for my heart to earn Poetry is love and love is life. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful. Your heart DESERVES love. Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Krystopher, I hope if this is about you personally, that the one you are writing about sees this. It's very touching.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice....enjoyed ever so much. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
~sighs and wipes away a tear~ Oh Krystopher, I know how this feels. This touched me deeply and I have to write it down (printer is shot). I'll be looking for more of your work. This is sadly beautiful I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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MissKlarmic Member
since 2003-02-20
Posts 70Canada,N.S |
such a touching beautiful peice of work. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The ache of longing this love is almost as wonderful as the attainment...for this is what makes that so amazing. Well done. ThisDiamond |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
A call we've all heard and made. Nicely done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Incredibly beautiful...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Krystopher, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, life shouldn't be like this and I send hugs of hope that soon you find the truths as lies are nothing but black! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krystopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words show that your heart has well earned the love you so desire...A wonderful poem... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Krystopher - a heart that yearns will one day find what it is looking for. Best to you... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I like the format of this... short but flowing M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love can be so incredibly beautiful when it is reciprocated. If this poem is about your yearning and burning desire for love, may love find you and fulfill all your dreams. Love & Light, EA |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Voting....... Give it to her...find out. Unless she's a fool who can't respond to verses like these, you'll get the ending you want. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I agree with all above! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Krys: I would die for you Would you even cry for me? the ultimate question - loved this xxoo |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Krystopher...Tender words. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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