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bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
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florida

0 posted 2003-03-28 10:18 AM


daffodils dancing
yellow paints the farmers fields,
one step at a time

[This message has been edited by bklynboy (03-28-2003 10:21 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-03-28 10:40 AM


bklynboy
Good one, enjoyed. I used to live in Brooklyn.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
2 posted 2003-03-28 12:20 PM


pretty poem
pretty boy
....pretty girl

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-03-28 12:22 PM


Love the view from here...

Peace & Light,
EA

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
4 posted 2003-03-28 12:30 PM


Hey, great vision!!! Enjoyed!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

bklynboy
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florida
5 posted 2003-03-28 01:26 PM


Sy,
If you live in Tamarac I live just north of you in PB County. Grew up in Bklyn 94th and Linden Blvd. Glad you and others like the write. I appreciate the encouragement as it gives me confidence to write more.Thanks!

inkedgoddess
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Ohio
6 posted 2003-03-28 01:30 PM


wow, daddeo,

i grew up in east flatbush, pitkin avenue, area..........maybe we shared an eggcream together

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
7 posted 2003-03-28 02:17 PM


Grin-
You gotta love those daffies! TD

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
8 posted 2003-03-28 02:23 PM


This sort of reminds me of a poem by William Wordsworth
Nice write and enjoyed the read!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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