Open Poetry #25 |
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Daffodils Dance..ode to an inked girl...Haiku |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
daffodils dancing yellow paints the farmers fields, one step at a time [This message has been edited by bklynboy (03-28-2003 10:21 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bklynboy Good one, enjoyed. I used to live in Brooklyn. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
pretty poem pretty boy ....pretty girl [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-28-2003 12:21 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love the view from here... Peace & Light, EA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Hey, great vision!!! Enjoyed!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Sy, If you live in Tamarac I live just north of you in PB County. Grew up in Bklyn 94th and Linden Blvd. Glad you and others like the write. I appreciate the encouragement as it gives me confidence to write more.Thanks! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
wow, daddeo, i grew up in east flatbush, pitkin avenue, area..........maybe we shared an eggcream together ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Grin- You gotta love those daffies! TD |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This sort of reminds me of a poem by William Wordsworth Nice write and enjoyed the read! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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