Open Poetry #25 |
Letter to A Soldier |
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Dearest darling as I write to you upon the heather kissed by dew I dream again of your sweet face another time, another place Will you return soon to my side? after fighting for our nation’s pride Know this, my love, for this I yearn to hold you dear when you return I pray to remain strong and true and keep my faith, alone for you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Poet - what a lovely testament - I think in this turmoil everyone seems to forget those that are left at home and the fear of those going away and leaving their families - very nice - excellent xxoo |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Nice job on remembering the hardest jobs in the military... that of the military wife. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful write, Sharon. I know there are many who are feeling this tonight. One of them is my next door neighbors daughter. She and her husband's boys are staying with her parents until her husband gets back from Iraq. He was just a few tents down from where the man threw the hand grenade into the tent the other day. Heart hugs, Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sharon~ awww I cried at this, I have two friends over there, and its so hard for me to enjoy life, and freedom right now....I worry as we all might do, and I know others have the same.....I feel so selfish just saying softly, pls bring them home safely.....life means so much more right now....and how we sometimes tend to forget what life means.... thank you for this.... sincerely Lauren~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I wonder how many times through the ages such letters have been written, such hearts have worried and yearned. *S* This is beautiful, PDV. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
upon the heather kissed by dew ====================== how lovely is that!! as is the intention and sincerety of this tender inspire born of our current events. Well done poetess Sharon. "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very touching piece of work. Brought tears to my eyes. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhh PdV ~ If only they could all read these loving words ~ just for sheer beauty in them. Bonnie |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all...I watch too much tv..saw a soldier sitting reading a letter and thought I should post something. I'm so glad you like it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You grace us far too infrequently SImply devine |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful sentiment, much enjoyed, regards Olias. |
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