Open Poetry #25 |
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When You Turned Left |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Sorry you haven't seen much of my work recently, I took an extra week for spring break. But I'm back. When You Turned Left you turned left I turned right venturung forth conquering new challanges traveled our own seperater paths that will never lead us back you turned left I turned right to see where our lives would take us maybe we'll meet in the end I doubt it, but aagain? when you left I turned out right |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome back..hope you enjoyed your break. Love this...two great closing lines as well! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Enjoyed the last two lines which I almost missed had Nancy not mentioned them. Creative! Welcome back... Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James - hahahaha - this is awesome: when you left I turned out right can relate - yes I can - awesome write xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good play on words, rk... well done! |
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