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Twenty or Less...God Won!
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Twenty or Less...God Won! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Just arrived From private hell. Ragged, scabbed, But, spirit bursting! Bled dry Yet, glistening grin. Wet of ~Well~ Never thirsting. . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (03-27-2003 12:35 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great write .... transfers a feeling of sunshine after the tempest. Love, Margherita |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Thanks for replying. You are just like Sunshine, herself. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I like your enthusiasm and the strength of your will. Pat, Pat, pat~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
That's the spirit! -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lori, Thank you. Not sure if there are any other rules of 20/less....but, I sure used every one of the twenty. Just felt inspired and happy today.... Thanks for the applause, grin, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Mark, It is the Spirit, the Holy one....how blessed am I? I surely did nothing to deserve it! And, especially having ~you~ take your time to reply to my poetry. (Guess I didn't break the rules of 20/less).... Thank you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (03-27-2003 03:06 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brava! Very inspirational Pat! Enjoyed the feeling within! ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Pat, this sounds like something I'd write, except this is better! Can sense the determination.. battle bought, battle bruised, and battle ready  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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morefiah Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 150Spanish Town, Jamaica |
To make 20/less really speak takes a special skill and talent. You did just great. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Nancy, Thanks for reading and replying. Glad you sensed the inspirational. Is to me too! ALyssa, I thought of you when writing this and glad you had a chance to read it. Yeah, battle bought, bruised and ready. Hugs and love Morefiah, Thank you for taking the time to read and reply. And, for the great. Glad to hear that. Vandana, Thank you for reading and commenting. Appreciate you. Hugs to all, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Patricia, this is beautiful, sweet friend, He always wins and He will never lose as His loving spirit will heal us all! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pat~ Ahhhhhhhh, such a poetess of accomplishment you are~ When you set your mind to it ... you can do ANYTHING WELL~ Lovely, sweet lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ Hey ya'll !  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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