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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-26 10:13 AM



Present Of Presence

there are ribbons
of blue, pink
and yellow
that wraps
me tenderly
and loose
not a bind
any place
but covers
in kindness
yards of
satin seams
bunched and
bowed in
the perfect
trimming of
your touch


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-03-26 10:29 AM


wonderfully done!
Thomas119gold
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2 posted 2003-03-26 11:03 AM


was that a Yes or No?
LOL

I love your poems
hope to see more new ones today
Thomas

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-03-26 11:05 AM


1slick_lady
Well done, enjoyed.

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4 posted 2003-03-26 11:11 AM


nicely wrapped words...around a feeling that seems at peace...

I enjoyed


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5 posted 2003-03-26 12:39 PM


Helen - this is perfect!! I love it. hugs to you dear lady, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-03-26 12:52 PM



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7 posted 2003-03-26 12:58 PM


Helen, this is pretty.
I love it.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Ericc
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8 posted 2003-03-26 04:35 PM


Beautiful!
Eric

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9 posted 2003-03-26 09:31 PM


enjoyed
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