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Open Poetry #25

Present Of Presence

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-26 10:13 AM

Present Of Presence

there are ribbons
of blue, pink
and yellow
that wraps
me tenderly
and loose
not a bind
any place
but covers
in kindness
yards of
satin seams
bunched and
bowed in
the perfect
trimming of
your touch

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-03-26 10:29 AM

wonderfully done!

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

2 posted 2003-03-26 11:03 AM

was that a Yes or No?
LOL

I love your poems
hope to see more new ones today
Thomas

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-03-26 11:05 AM

1slick_lady
Well done, enjoyed.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-03-26 11:11 AM

nicely wrapped words...around a feeling that seems at peace...

I enjoyed

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-03-26 12:39 PM

Helen - this is perfect!! I love it. hugs to you dear lady, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-03-26 12:52 PM

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-26 12:58 PM

Helen, this is pretty.
I love it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2003-03-26 04:35 PM

Beautiful!
Eric

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-03-26 09:31 PM

enjoyed

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