Open Poetry #25 |
blue chalk dust |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
two-step-poetry blue chalk dust upon my hands there is a certain symmetry this it IS a life's ballet as the pink of points turn gray from the weary of the show dinner circuit in L.A. they didn't hear a word I wrote-- the croutons claimed the stage of ear asking for another glass-- I thought refills were free... upon the plate and muffled chuckles through linen folded cotten to the lips to prove they are such "gentlemen"-- quotes appropriate. and greeted sun standing as my arms are stretched opened palms to capture all... the very-ness of most of me oh-pretend an end to squall dancing in the mysteries-- |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Forks in scrape upon the plate and muffled chuckles through linen folded cotten to the lips to prove they are such "gentlemen"-- quotes appropriate. serenity - how did this deep write go unnoticed? I never know which emotion to expect in your gifts to us. I am never disappointed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
they didn't hear a word I wrote-- the croutons claimed the stage of ear asking for another glass-- This is a wonderful write Your talents are well appreciated Applaus! Liz |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K - I did this as I read: as my arms are stretched opened palms to capture all... always a theater . . . as always leaving me . . . in awe xxoo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey sweetie - I read this early a.m....and I couldn't think of a good response... still don't have one and it's the fifth time I've read it. Publish. Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Here i am alone again two-step-poetry blue chalk dust upon my hands there is a certain symmetry this it IS a life's ballet Perfectly splendid. One of your very best. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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