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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2003-03-24 10:31 PM





Slipping from it's pedestal
embarassed by it all,
a lovely white rose
blushing from the fall.

Reposed upon the table
amid the silver stones,
pretty in soft pink
and a pale rose tone.

WhiteRose




© Copyright 2003 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-03-24 11:12 PM


Anne - this is so eloquent - and I love roses - adore roses - miss my rose garden  . . . your writing here is just lovely  xxoo
Miah
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2 posted 2003-03-24 11:24 PM


Pink roses are my absolute fave.  Actually, I love all roses.  I could almost smell their fragrance through your words.  

[This message has been edited by Miah (03-24-2003 11:25 PM).]

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3 posted 2003-03-24 11:26 PM




Anne,

You do write beautifully. Seem to do so well with colors. (and roses)    Soft and tender. Just lovely.


Hugs, Pat

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4 posted 2003-03-25 01:06 AM


Anne, this is so beautiful. I love roses,
so I loved the poem and the picture. Just stunning!!  

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-03-25 01:10 AM


So beautiful and metaphoric. Roses are now blooming in my head...
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6 posted 2003-03-25 01:26 AM


very beautiful, I enjoyed.

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7 posted 2003-03-25 03:52 AM


God! That's beautiful!
Margherita
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8 posted 2003-03-25 04:11 AM


This is gorgeous!
Love, Margherita

[This message has been edited by Margherita (03-25-2003 04:11 AM).]

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9 posted 2003-03-25 06:24 AM


Simply Beautiful.. Ms Rose

Maree.

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10 posted 2003-03-25 11:44 AM


WhiteRose~
This is just elegant~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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11 posted 2003-03-25 11:58 AM


This is as soft and rosy as a gentle, loving kiss upon the cheek...

Warm hugs,
EA

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12 posted 2003-03-25 11:59 AM


nicely done in flow and imagery... I enjoyed
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13 posted 2003-03-25 12:40 PM


WhiteRose
Pic and poem both lovely.

WhiteRose
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14 posted 2003-03-25 08:21 PM


Thank you all so much for your very kind responses.

Mom gave me a digital camera, as I'm sure most of you know, for my birthday. I got tired of taking pictures of myself

So I branched out and started taking pictures of other things. Now nothing in the house or yard is safe from my lens.

Thank you again, one and all, for your very kind words.

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15 posted 2003-03-26 10:39 AM


This is so beautiful, I swear the scent of roses fills my cubicle after the read. *S*
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16 posted 2003-03-26 10:46 AM


Whiterose
Nothing can compare to the feelings that are felt when inhaling the fragrance of flowers
Especially a rose
Bravo
The Rogue

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17 posted 2003-03-26 04:39 PM


This is lovely.
Eric

Robert Frazier
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18 posted 2003-03-26 04:53 PM


Anne, roses do me in...and so does this ode!  lovely!

Rf

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19 posted 2003-03-26 09:32 PM


nice
WhiteRose
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20 posted 2003-03-26 09:35 PM


Thank you suthern, I'm so glad you enjoyed the read.
WhiteRose
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21 posted 2003-03-26 09:36 PM


Hi Rogue, Thank you for your very kind words. The poetic caress of your response was lovely.
WhiteRose
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22 posted 2003-03-26 09:37 PM


Ericc,
   Thank you so much for reading.

WhiteRose
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23 posted 2003-03-26 09:38 PM


Robert,
   Thanks so much for your lovely response.

WhiteRose
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24 posted 2003-03-26 09:39 PM


Vandana, so glad you enjoyed, thank you for your response.
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