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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-03-25 06:07 PM

I would not bend a road
to loose one mile between us
or dash afar to behold your radiant soul
and if for you i am held to wait
no time too much the waiting for

Now, this much i'll consider
the price, the prize, the joy
if for you i should wait, my love
would be of the heart
'tis nothing more

Rf

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-03-25 06:22 PM

you are so romantic

M

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

2 posted 2003-03-25 06:28 PM

M, hopelessly so!

Rf

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-03-25 06:45 PM

Robert..you are a hopeless romantic.
Beautifully written.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-03-25 07:06 PM

The R in Romance must also stand for "Robert"...

Love & Light,
EA

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

5 posted 2003-03-25 08:07 PM

Oh I agree, this is a very romantic write.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2003-03-25 08:12 PM

'Now, this much i'll consider
the price, the prize, the joy
if for you i should wait, my love
would be of the heart
'tis nothing more'

Am finding this particularly appropriate today. You nailed that verse!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-03-26 02:16 PM

This almost has the tendency to
be a puzzle poem..."does he love me, love me not"
with a bit of hope
at the end...

I read this yesterday, several times, and found it again today, to be a very pleasant read...

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

8 posted 2003-03-26 04:33 PM

Sunshine, interesting...can see how you might read it that way. how 'bout this, "my love need be no nearer that her place in my heart" PS thanks for the second read!

Rf

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-03-27 11:49 AM

Enjoyed the simplicity and the fact that love is worth waiting for.

Great title and sentiment.

Nice work Robert Frazier..

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

10 posted 2003-03-27 11:52 AM

Robert--seems no matter how far or close you are to it, love is always in the center. Enjoyed this!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2003-03-27 01:08 PM

Robert~
The title caught me ... the spell-binding write held me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

12 posted 2003-03-27 02:57 PM

Robert,

Oh my, can't tell you how much I like this. Well, yes I can. I love this.
Really touching and very special.

Enjoyed thoroughly, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

morefiah
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since 2003-03-26

Posts 150
Spanish Town, Jamaica

13 posted 2003-03-27 04:27 PM

Robert,
All is not lost methinks.... Romance lives!
You go boy!

Morefiah.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

14 posted 2003-03-27 05:18 PM

enjoyed

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

15 posted 2003-03-27 07:11 PM

Robert - this reads like a beautiful sonnet - is lovely . . . xxoo

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