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(20 wds or less challenge)GONE NUTS
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(20 wds or less challenge)GONE NUTS |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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I kind of went nuts with the challenge, so here is a few of them... Little boys and little girls play totally oblivious obscenely serene ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm begging you to see me now for who I am hope to be have always been ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sleepy eyes close weary of life never seeing light at the end of tunnels ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Half-hearted smiles greeted by half-assed greetings erased when reality hits ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Self-seeking souls wander aimlessly drowning in loneliness blinded by pity ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A soul tormented found by love forever complete peaceful ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thirst-quenching soul fulfilling groovy kind of love that's you and me always forever Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kristie Sue, I like every one of them! Good job! Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like it. Good job with the exercise |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Thank you Rg2u and Brad ;-) They came easily for some reason...just popped out.... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I'm begging you to see me now for who I am hope to be have always been Damn I LOVE that one! They're all great, wonderful job! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lol...gone nuts...don't think so... these are tight little nuggets of insight and the form well done.. I enjoyed |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wasn't this fun!! I especially liked this one~ I'm begging you to see me now for who I am hope to be have always been You did good KristieSue |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
LOL Koko, that was one of my favs...thanks! Ron LOL True...I tend to write personally sometimes...and when we write off the top of our head, I tend to think that's our heart screaming at us sometimes.... Thanks :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
KristieSue, you've done me proud! Congrats on the inspire...-MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed your festival of "Nuts"--each one was delicious! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Thank y'all *blush* I guess my favorite is the "half hearted" diddy... to the next challenge... :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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