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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-03-25 02:17 PM

Unwind My Spring

At times I sit with heart in throat,
the pulsing almost choking me.
Behind the thoughts rise worry more,
than eyes can show the fear in see.

These days bring out the wastefulness
of timeless searching for answers, none.
I sit alone with heart in throat,
feeling the ache of "never done".

I word my thoughts to speak my mind
though sometimes emotion counter acts.
I'm troubled more than others see
inside, it piles, the truth of fact.

To take a walk, unwind my spring
along the tracks of yesterday,
I see you there, awaiting me
with long of stride and candid sway.

This I do to change my thoughts,
to lessen feels of "never done"
with hope that someday I'll concede
and grant myself as "number one".

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-03-25 02:23 PM

Yes, my friend.
We are indeed, on the same path...
let's walk in silence, shall we?

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-03-25 02:41 PM

..."Unwind My Spring"---You should have a book published with all your wonderful phrases! Theyrrrrrre! Greeeeaaaaaat!

Warm, springtime hugs,
EA

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-03-25 03:37 PM

yes that was an excellant phrase

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

4 posted 2003-03-25 03:53 PM

This I do to change my thoughts,
to lessen feels of "never done"
with hope that someday I'll concede
and grant myself as "number one".

This has brought a smile to my face

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-03-25 04:27 PM

So well said. Hugs from ThisDiamond

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

6 posted 2003-03-25 05:31 PM

words so true, I too have felt the build-up, being troubled more than the others could see. I enjoyed this piece very much, the style was good.

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-25 05:58 PM

Maureen, I love the way you did this...
just beautiful.

Hugs,
Ethel

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-03-25 06:48 PM

nakdthoughts - repeat after me, 'BC said I was number one, so it must be true'...

BC

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-03-26 03:00 AM

Sometimes number one lets others go first, not just to appease someone else, but to please themselves...and I am not convinced that is such a bad thing.

It's a fine line....between them~

Love and hugs Maureen~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-03-26 04:40 AM

awesome write Maureen! I loved it so much I read it twice and stashed it in the library!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2003-03-26 06:45 AM

Awwww Maureen, you are number one.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2003-03-26 09:42 PM

enjoyed

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