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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-03-25 02:01 PM

Silence
Halting the heart
With briefest nod to grief
As knuckled grip seems to loosen
Bared cold chill clutches, strangling voice once more
Stumbling in tracks of salty tears
Traces of words on wind
Filling one with
Silence

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-25-2003 02:02 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-03-25 02:18 PM

I am on your track today *s

hugss
M

off to take a walk along them...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-03-25 02:45 PM

You are a master (or are you a mistress?) at writing in poetic forms----and at writing poetry without any form or structure, as well...

Love & Light,
Linda

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-03-25 02:58 PM

Lovely...very lovely.
Filled me with peace and a calmness.
Thank you for this treasure...
~Hugs~

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-03-25 03:37 PM

Karilea - I sat in silence to-day in my backyard. It is amazing how we take our senses for granted. Lovely write. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-03-25 03:38 PM

Good use of this form!

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

6 posted 2003-03-25 05:01 PM

Ahhhh the touch of a maestro? maestriss?
Ms. maestro? Madame maestress? Whichever applies can't hide the true beauty of your writing. How very exquisite. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-25 05:10 PM

Beautiful, Karilea
You know I love it.

Hugs,
Ethel

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

8 posted 2003-03-25 08:13 PM

Traces of words on wind...

Exquisite!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2003-03-25 08:19 PM

Karilea--sometimes silence is more profoud than words.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2003-03-25 08:32 PM

'Traces of words on wind
Filling one with
Silence'

Yep, I've heard them...

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

11 posted 2003-03-25 08:46 PM

Extremely powerful and excellent poetry. I enjoyed the read.

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2003-03-25 09:33 PM

Hugs my dear.
The empty out demands the time to recharge.
Ah, but what wonder in the silence.
TD

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2003-03-25 09:44 PM

Sunshine - at times the sadness does hold one in silence...

BC

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

14 posted 2003-03-25 10:33 PM

You do these very well, Karilea. As you do with everything you write.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2003-03-26 09:44 PM

enjoyed

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