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thoughts of you
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thoughts of you |
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ShaolinsOnlyPoet Junior Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 31Brooklyn, New York |
Did you know at night, I cried for you. So alone in my life, I had wept for you. This place in my heart, was waiting for you. This hole in my soul, was filled by you. The loneliness that I felt, could not be described to you. In my dreams, I dreamt of only you. Us together forever, just me and you. My soul is at rest, just waiting for you. My heart everytime, broke for you. These tears from my eyes, they fell for you. You yelled and screamed, yet I still loved you. You threw a fit and said "that's it", I was mad at you. You mad me cry, I would have just died for you. You said I lied, and I just cried for you. You weren't always there, but I still cared for you. In my heart, there will always be a place for you. And in my mind, there will always be thoughts of you ~~::~Candii~::~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad. Full of emotion. I liked it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good, sad, bittersweet |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Another poem I can totally relate to. You have no idea how many times I have gone through these exact same emotions in my life. I'm thoroughly enjoying reading your poetry tonight. Dawn |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Quite sad.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings...James |
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