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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-03-14 09:59 AM



Kaleidoscope Dreams

The dreaming it builds
While time ticks away
In night resting places
Ever hoping one day!

On shimmering lakes
Free flowing streams
Intimately romancing
Kaleidoscope dreams

We shake away blues
Stars kissing to eyes
Mystical lovers meet
Across lavender skies

Kaleidoscope turning
Dreamscape reflection
Star cross lovers meet
Star glows connection

Brighter and stronger
We dance and sashay
Embracing in dreams
Till night turns to day

Hope ©2003

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2003-03-14 10:06 AM


Hope, I believe that this is one of my all time favorites of yours.  Very well done.
HopeS
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2 posted 2003-03-14 10:22 AM


Hey thanks Donna !! I'm always the romantic at heart , I also loved those Kaleidescope  when I was a kid , those which turned to reveal magic patterns and colours
I guess the poem combined both
Hope

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3 posted 2003-03-14 01:39 PM


And, Hope, how very beautiful the
combination of the two are.
I loved this....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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4 posted 2003-03-14 01:57 PM


star crossed, lover
coming undercover,
to make it all real,
would erase its appeal

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5 posted 2003-03-14 07:47 PM




(smiles) Oh Hope, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love your wonderful poetry, this brought my rainbow smile to my heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-03-14 07:56 PM


Oh boy! Im so glad I read this.. lol

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

Justbleu
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7 posted 2003-04-02 04:11 PM


Ah....this is wonderful!!!! Thank You!!!
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette
P.S. Come around passions more often with more like this!!!!!

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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