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Open Poetry #25

Inner-monsoon

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-03-24 07:46 AM

Thoughts sailing ancient dreams
stranded in real life it seems
Feels I once could only wish
consume my heart in gentle kiss

Once I hoped a thousand times
begging happiness to be born
Life was just a driving train
passing by, just moving, left forlorn

Then one day ... a special noon
all still published in my mind
creation of an inner-monsoon
'cause you stood there, fair and kind

There and then, I'll never forget
I witnessed a peculiar birth...
happiness ... when we both met
and 'us' became a noun with extended worth

Allowing my heart to float the tides
and face the waves of ... this feel
Tender it goes, without any guide
Slowly exploring what love reveals

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-24 08:15 AM

zenny -

Loved this:

and 'us' became a noun with extended worth

know that too well - this is lovely xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-24-2003 08:15 AM).]

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

2 posted 2003-03-24 01:14 PM

thanks for replying littlewing

that line is one of my favourites too

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