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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2003-03-24 10:21 AM


The remnants of winter has gone,
The piles of dirty snow did go,
It has melted away it’s done
Fog rolls in from the bay to stay
And I watch sunrise alone
Standing in the doorway of day.

Gloom


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-03-24 10:33 AM


..."standing in the doorway of day..."

I enjoyed emensely your "Random Thoughts" and your "Observations". Lovely write.

Warm hugs,
EA

Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2003-03-24 10:56 AM


Thank you, Earth Angel
For taking the time and I am pleased you enjoyed

Gloom

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3 posted 2003-03-24 11:14 AM


...really painted a photo in my head.  I enjoyed!

KS

Professor Gloom
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4 posted 2003-03-24 11:31 AM


Thank you, KristieSue,
Pleased you enjoyed my painting with words
In shades of gray.

Gloom

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-03-24 11:36 AM



Quite a picture, professor...
makes one want to curl up
quietly with a good book...

have to admit, I liked the same line as Earth Angel did...

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Saluting with misty eyes
6 posted 2003-03-24 11:47 AM


"...And I watch sunrise alone..."
The best way to start your day.
Great job.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-03-24 01:05 PM


a beautiful melancholy
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-03-24 01:12 PM


A break in the time melting away
the winter thoughts that clothe my bed,
needing a change, and a place to be stored,
to be relieved, replaced by the Spring.

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