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Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

0 posted 2003-03-24 12:41 PM

The first time i met my G/F i knew it was going to be something different.... and it has been, i love her so much and this is my way of telling her....I love you Melissa

The first time I gazed into your alluring eyes,
I was absorbed; swallowed by their unseen depth.
The first time I heard your vibrant voice,
I was mesmerized; entranced by each timbre that passes your lips.
The first time I entwined my fingers in yours,
I was fascinated; amazed by each strong yet achingly tender caress.
The first time I engaged you in playful flirtation,
I smiled inwardly; smitten by your girlish charm.
The first time I allowed you into my world,
I swallowed nervously; startled by the depth of my love for you.
The first time I thought you'd perish from my life,
I cried silently, frightened by the possibility of being without you.
The first time I listened to the sound of your heart beats,
I couldn't stop; aspired by the prospect that it might beat for me.
The first time I laid enveloped in your welcoming arms,
I couldn't believe; overwhelmed by the intensity of the security they provide.
The first time I took a glimpse at your soul,
I couldn't blink; captivated by the unspoken dreams and promises it offers.
The first time I kissed your inviting lips,
You embraced me, making me yearn for the feel of your gentle touch.
The first time I whispered I love you in your ears,
You kissed me; leaving me spellbound as your blissful lips engage mine.
The first time I revealed my dreams to you,
You impressed me, telling me that they're your dreams too.
Of all the experiences that we have been through,
These are a few of the first times I've shared with you.
They're the cherished first times that have come to past,
Yet they are the memories that will perpetually last.

[This message has been edited by Silver_Tryst (03-24-2003 03:27 AM).]

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

1 posted 2003-03-24 12:45 PM

Friend, this reads like a great love story and would be excellent in poem format as well.
Nice Write.
Rob

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

2 posted 2003-03-24 03:27 AM

thanks RDZ

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2003-03-25 10:24 PM

Hi Silver_Tryst,

This was very much enjoyable and welcome to Passions, look forward to more of your poetry..

Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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