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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-03-22 04:20 PM



Spring Thoughts




Dots Dots Dash, suppose
God’s silent notes of Morse code
Limbs catch hold this love



Bursting forth in song
Buds blossoming at its call
Colors begin to pique



© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-22 04:30 PM


Hello Karilea

Such beautiful images I saw through your words and the pictures really complimented so very well.  It's hard to imagine you going into Spring as we are into Autumn now.  I must thank you for the pictures you did for me which I really appreciated.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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2 posted 2003-03-22 04:45 PM


Karilea - I have often thought that the clouds are giving us signals of some kind...not just of weather changes...but something else....
Good write my friend, and the robin looks ever so proud of his splendid red breast! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-03-22 04:57 PM


Spring at last!  And how I have waited and longed for this one.
Oh!  I heard a robin out on my front lawn early this morning..
A smile before breakfast...that's a good thing.  
Enjoyed this so much hip-sis!
~Hugs~


~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~


[This message has been edited by Enchantress (03-22-2003 04:58 PM).]

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4 posted 2003-03-22 06:44 PM


So lovely!
Nothing compares to the renewal we experience in this season ... may it affect everybody and everything!
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-03-22 07:43 PM






(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is lovely, dearest friend, I have yet to see a robin outside in my backyard as we got 31 inches of snow this week, and may get another storm this Monday but nevertheless I see many flickers and mountain bluebirds around here! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, have a happy spring, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-03-22 07:43 PM


Thank you for sharing your Spring thoughts with us! This evening, after watching CNN on TV, your post is just what the doctor ordered!   Delightfully refreshing and pure!

Love & Light,
Linda

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7 posted 2003-03-22 07:44 PM


enjoyed
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8 posted 2003-03-22 09:48 PM


Such simple, yet elegant phrasing, Karilea.  Love your work.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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9 posted 2003-03-22 10:05 PM


quote:
Bursting forth in song


Hurry spring.....hugsssss you this is fantastic!!!!!!

Lauren~

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

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10 posted 2003-03-22 10:29 PM


Sunshine - soon, it's a coming soon, with all of its newness...

BC

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11 posted 2003-03-23 07:15 AM


..Sunshine../\..there's nothing like a lovely Spring poem..thanks..

../\..Spiros


-------------calm------------

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12 posted 2003-03-23 08:37 AM


looking more forward too spring now.....love your thoughts

Charisma

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13 posted 2003-03-23 11:06 AM



Finally...

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14 posted 2003-03-23 11:38 AM


This is beautiful Karilea,
the thoughts, the words, and
the pictures.
thank you...

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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15 posted 2003-03-23 12:03 PM


Gr8 piece I love spring and the freshness that comes with it
M@C

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16 posted 2003-03-24 04:44 AM


Karilea - my my my - I am keeping this one - is just amazing  . . .  xxoo
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17 posted 2003-03-25 10:27 PM


Hi Sunshine,

This is great, very much enjoyed and so nice to read your work.

Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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