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Open Poetry #25

Alone

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

0 posted 2003-03-24 12:00 PM

Together here at last we stand
at the very edge of land
of life of love, of truth and trust
weve come this far, finish we must

we are the worlds last true hope
the last true hope for all
alone we stand, two for all
what would happen should we fall?

Alone we stand here and now
forever are we forsaken
of all things we all enjoy
from us our lifes were taken

together at the head of war
to end it all forever more
we must end this war, my friend
at all costs, these tragedies MUST end.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-24 12:06 PM

This is so true. War helps nothing.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

2 posted 2003-03-24 12:09 PM

Thouroughly enjoyed. Great Write

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

3 posted 2003-03-24 12:43 PM

aaa yes waw does solve nothing
nice write

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2003-03-25 10:17 PM

Hi Rdz9,

Very nice to have you here at Passions and enjoyed your work.

Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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