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Lonely Room |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Emptiness. Silence. Loneliness. Primal screams of rage conjured up from within. They hit the air like drops of water on heated metal. I share my room with no one. My horror is my own. Fear taunting me like the sound of banshee's in my head. I give the key to no one. Solitude becoming a way of life. The silence not golden but deafening. My suffering punding ceaseless, Without tranquility. I share my room with no one. Private and destitute a place. Dementia it's sole purpose. The wrath is forth coming. Terror misting the eyes, causing pools of rain, From the malice deep within me. Raised hands above the earth, Imploring the maker for asylum away from this wretched place. No escape. No harmony. I share my room with no one. Sheer paranoia. A living demise. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Scarry~ but there is something to be said for holding the key. I think that is your out if you so choose to make it be. I also understand that's easier said than done. I've been there done that, surrounded by the sound of silence. I'm sorry for these feelings that you have. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I could feel your pain, anger, and loneliness. It was almost palpable. May you get past these difficult times, and have your bedroom a place of peace and joy... May your dreams be sweet and reflect a joyous reality! Peace & Love, EA |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
BluesSerenade - Thank you sooo much! Earth Angel - Thank you for the kind words. Peace is upon me as we speak!  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
from time to time, i visit that place, its kind of cool, just dont dwell too long, if possible |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Yes Goddess. I've spent too much time there. I try not to go back TOO often. But I do visit. Thank you sweetie! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Albert, I've been there in the past quite a lot. I sure didn't like it at all, and try very hard not to visit it again. I do admit that I sometimes feel myself slipping back to that territory. But, I try my best not to take the journey. It's depression to me. Heart Hugs to you, Ethel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful voice. Eric |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thanks Garysgrl and Ericc!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Albert, this is so very sad, dearest friend, I know this feeling ever so much as I am living in this asylum right now and have half a mind to believe love just isn't for me and should leave it to those who really need it! (sad sigh) I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, love will find your deserving heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Albert...Emotive writing...if you can write about it, then you are not altogether doomed. Wishing you peace. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thanks Noah and Martie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Albert - hey now what are you doing visiting my house already . . . ugh know this too - be good to you xxoo |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Sorry littlewing. I won't visit next time until you invite me....Thanks sweetie.  ~Al |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Oh man...This aches...:'( I wish I could give ya a big hug! Keep your head up and keep the pen in hand. It is a great release. ~humungous hugs~ I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thanks KOKO. Wish you could too! I'll keep writing. ~Al |
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