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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-03-22 10:43 PM

This is it,
you have to know it's time.

I waited, I debated,
went on while I hated,
  damn I was fated,
no matter I contemplated
still...the world,
  it went on.

It turned, mistakes,
I never learned.
Forget I got burned,
spurned, my stomach
     churned
with bitterness
     helplessness,

and still the world
went on, it kept on.

I fell upon, you.
Now it's twisted,
shadowed, askew,
      on it's axis,

and I'm in a perpetual state
              of
                 f
                   a
                     l
                       l
                         i
                           n
                             g.

WhiteRose

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-03-22 11:49 PM

There is no controlling our fate...or is there? I enjoy your writing whether it matters to you or not....I really do.

You're a fine poetess WhiteRose~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-03-23 12:00 PM

f
a
  l
   l
    i
     n
      g

Very effective!

Warm hugs,
EA

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2003-03-23 12:02 PM

BluesSerenade,

It does matter to me. I write to touch others, when I know that I have, then I feel that I am blessed. Thank you dear sweet lady, for those very kind words.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2003-03-23 12:04 PM

Linda, thank you earthy angel.

It may be effective, but I swear everytime I click on this post and scroll down the page, I get a bit dizzy.

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

5 posted 2003-03-23 03:48 AM

WhiteRose

I always enjoy reading your words..

Very nice..

Hugsssssssssssss

Smile...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-03-23 04:23 AM

very good...I enjoyed this

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-03-23 07:05 AM

Tough words, that touch. Very effective write! No falling, without rising again ... it's in the nature of things.
Hugs. Margherita

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

8 posted 2003-03-23 09:40 AM

A very tragic story of a love affair?
But oh, how elegantly painted.
As one who has stood in those shoes
Now and then,
I enjoyed this very much. Ken J

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-03-23 10:47 AM

Anne, this is a really strong write.
Sounds like you've got determination
to not stay down, even if you did fall.
The form you used for this was very effective.

By the way, friend, I always
enjoy your poetry.

Heart Hugs,

Ethel

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