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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-03-22 07:22 PM



~*~

I stand naked before thee.
If ye be so desirous of mine flesh,
cast not a stone upon it.
Touch this heart and soul with love,
then ye shall taste the sweetness
of my secrets.

~*~

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2003-03-22 07:25 PM


Well now...  

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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2 posted 2003-03-22 07:27 PM




(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, I think in order for true love to live, one has to look through ones flesh and see the heart and soul, as we must love from the heart! (big huggggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-03-22 07:27 PM


Quite an offer
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-03-22 07:30 PM


Lovely....very lovely.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-03-22 07:33 PM


Mark ~

Now what are you thinking about, you naughty boy?!?  tehe

Peace & Light,
Earthy Angel

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6 posted 2003-03-22 07:34 PM


Noah ~

I am a firm believer in that as well...

Peace & Love,
Linda

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-22 07:35 PM


Aenimal ~

Oh, you do so make these cherubic cheeks blush...

Peace & Light,
EA

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8 posted 2003-03-22 07:36 PM


Nancy ~

Why thank you!, dear queen of steamin' hot stuff!  

Peace & Love,
Linda

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9 posted 2003-03-22 08:52 PM


Darn!! I was hoping it was illustrated!
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10 posted 2003-03-22 08:59 PM


Earth Angel - h'mmmmmm...

BC

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11 posted 2003-03-22 09:36 PM


Cherubic friend,
This does transend.
For you I'd fend
off dragon's blend
of dinner trend.

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-03-22 10:41 PM


Well I might as well sketch you while your standing there...did you know that nude models make from twelve to thirty five dollars an hour...James
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13 posted 2003-03-22 10:50 PM


Linda,
I'm giggling at these guys replies.
I think that title got them a little curious,
don't you? HeeHee!!....And  Mr. Ball'deer
hoping you had it illustrated....LOL

Oh, Earthey Angel, I liked your poem, too.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

Albert J. Allie
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14 posted 2003-03-22 10:51 PM


Things that make ya go....hmmm

Beautiful

WhiteRose
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15 posted 2003-03-22 10:54 PM


Linda, this is so softly sensual. Only you, dear earthy angel, could write this. Simply beautiful.
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16 posted 2003-03-22 11:21 PM


Balladeer ~

...perhaps if we were to get to know each other better...  

Peace & Love,
EA

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17 posted 2003-03-22 11:23 PM


BC ~

"h'mmmmm"--now you've got me thinkin' as well...  

Peace & Light,

EA

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18 posted 2003-03-22 11:24 PM


Ken ~

Ah, thank you dear knight! You would make a valiant protector!  

Peace & Love,

EA

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19 posted 2003-03-22 11:26 PM


Ethel ~

---I agree! The Pip guys are great!

~ Sweet dreams!  

Peace & Love,
Linda

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20 posted 2003-03-22 11:28 PM


Albert ~

Oh, that is so cute--and I'll bet you look so cute with your index finger pressed into the dimple on your cheek!  

Light & Love,
EA

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21 posted 2003-03-22 11:31 PM


WhiteRose ~

Yesireee Bob! I'm an angel of the lower phyllums!--Your plain, everyday, garden variety of Earthy angels!  

--and thank  you for the generous words...

Warm hugs,
EA

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22 posted 2003-03-22 11:40 PM


James  ~

Whoops a daisy! I almost missed your reply!
I used to make a great deal of money from modelling when I was in school. It paid very well, but I got to keep my clothes on!---well, now that I think about it, that isn't entirely true--those swimsuits didn't leave much to the imagination!  

Seet dreams!
EA

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23 posted 2003-03-23 01:56 AM


This may be the best thing that you've written. I think it's stellar! (but, what do I know)
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24 posted 2003-03-23 02:12 AM


what wisdom
when a lover can realize when you are being open & vulnerable -
& be tender

I Loved This One

[This message has been edited by dreambuilder (03-23-2003 02:14 AM).]

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25 posted 2003-03-23 06:52 AM


This is one time when I would appreciate a picture posted along with the poem...James
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26 posted 2003-03-23 09:06 AM


Ed ~

"Stellar" you say?!? Why thank you, dear poet! When I consider the source of such a compliment, I am honored!  

Peace & Love,
Linda

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27 posted 2003-03-23 09:07 AM


dreambuilder ~

Thank you very much!  You appear to have a complete understanding of where I am coming from!

Light & Peace,
Earth Angel

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28 posted 2003-03-23 09:08 AM


James ~

I'll send you a picture telepathically! I can do that, you know!--it is one of my secret talents...

Love & Light,
EA

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29 posted 2003-03-23 11:26 AM


EA,

Very visual, nice write.

SG

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30 posted 2003-03-23 05:49 PM


Get to know each other better?

Canada....FLorida...we're almost neighbors!!


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This speaks as much to the soul, Linda, as any other physical aspect one might give it.  Well done!

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32 posted 2003-03-23 07:41 PM


SG ~

"Very visual" you say?---(Earthy Angel suddenly blushing)  Can you see me from where you are?...

~ Peace & Light,
  EA

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33 posted 2003-03-23 07:43 PM


Balladeer ~

Oh, I must get myself a pair of binoculars such as those!---then I can feast mine eyes upon thee...  

Peace & Love,
EA

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34 posted 2003-03-23 07:45 PM


Sunshine ~

Thank you, dear glorious solar orb!  

Peace & Light,
Linda

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35 posted 2003-03-23 08:04 PM


Well, dear Ms. Linda, I don't know if you had someone in mind when you wrote this or not, but what a delightful and sensual piece.

Huggles and winks, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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36 posted 2003-03-23 08:07 PM


Marti ~

~     ~

~ Linda
Oh, you know me sooooooo well!

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37 posted 2003-03-23 08:21 PM


Earth Angel - The more I read this and thought about it, the more I thought about it. Well you know what I mean...

BC

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38 posted 2003-03-23 08:33 PM


BC ~

When I heareth the saying: "Still water runneth deep--'tis thou's name that dost first come to mine thoughts!

Love & Light,
EA


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39 posted 2003-03-23 09:49 PM


I read this several times just to soak it in. Another one added to my favorites.
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40 posted 2003-03-23 10:54 PM


Miah ~

Your lovely reply was a wonderful bedtime present! I am going to bed now with a smile on my face! Thank you!

Sweet dreams!

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

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41 posted 2003-03-23 11:00 PM


My brush adding you to canvas as we speak. Lovely!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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42 posted 2003-03-24 07:35 AM


Auguste ~

Now that would please me to no end! I'd sit--or stand--before you, for as long as you needed me to!

Peace & Love,
EA

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43 posted 2003-03-24 08:51 PM


Linda - ahhh . . . to see ones' soul is but a true gift of self . . . to be given with love and love yet returned - and here you have bared it once again . . . true poetry my friend - straight from the heart of an angel . . .  xxoo  

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44 posted 2003-03-24 08:55 PM


littlewing ~

A warm reply from a warm-hearted soul...Thank you.

Peace, Light & Love,
EA

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45 posted 2003-03-24 10:34 PM


So lovely.
I Enjoyed this visit.
Warm greetings,
Etain.

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46 posted 2003-03-24 10:42 PM


Pure sentiments expressed here...know the soul as well as the body..

believe in what your heart feels...

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47 posted 2003-03-24 10:53 PM


Etain ~

Thank you!

I noticed that you hail for "The dark side of the moon."--I often wondered what it was like over there...  

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

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48 posted 2003-03-24 10:54 PM


Scorpio ~

This feline Leo purrs her gratitude...  

Love & Light,
EA


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49 posted 2003-03-25 07:39 AM


hmmm.. I see I am a bit late.. the offer has been considered by several and no refusals that I read..lol...

ah well... so is the way it goes... but...
better late than never...

very nicely done... I enjoyed

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50 posted 2003-03-25 07:46 AM


Captain ~

So there you are! I have been waiting for you...I mean, waiting for a reply from you...  

Peace & Light,
EA

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51 posted 2003-03-25 08:20 AM


(chuckling) .. nice touch.. waiting for me..lol...


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52 posted 2003-03-25 08:25 AM


Ah, I see you are back for seconds...er, I mean for a second visit...  

Luvs & Hugs,
EA

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53 posted 2003-03-25 08:27 AM


LOL.. you are bad....  seconds...

Some things in life one does not rush... nor do they quantify in terms of number.. they either immerse themselves in it and become lost..or they only play...

seconds....can become hours...



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54 posted 2003-03-25 08:34 AM


Earth Angel
I see you have taken off your wings to bath in humanities pool. LOL

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Captain  ~

...I found your reply quite intriguing...

Hmmm! Stretching seconds into hours... Oh, my! What is happening to this little angel?!? If truth be known, my halo is held in place by two teeny weeny, eensy beensy, iddy biddy, little pointy things!---But let's keep that between us!--okay, el capitan?

Love & Light,
EA


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56 posted 2003-03-25 08:39 AM


Mr. T.----you caught me! There are two sides to every coin!

At times I am an angel--and then the earthy side takes over...

Your response was amusing and appealed to both of my sides!  

Luvs & Hugs,
EA

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57 posted 2003-03-26 10:31 AM


Now there's no way in the world I'll ever voice the words "thank heavens Toe is out of town" ... this missing him schtuff is tuff. *G* But I will give thanks that you posted this now... no need in giving the man (any more) ideas! LOL

Beautiful work, angelic one. *S*

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58 posted 2003-03-26 10:44 AM


Suthern Belle ~

Yep, Pip's darling digit may be outta sight, but he isn't outta mind!  

When he returns, may your love fest begin anew!  

Hugs & Stuff,
EA

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