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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2003-03-25 08:25 PM



I don't want to be lost,

placed in mind
with those memories
you are so close
to throwing away.

I need the space of same
a lack of change
I need you to remember
more than my name.

Lost is not
the place for me
yet you push, and push
   continuously,

I am slipping into forgotten
and I fear becoming

vague.

WhiteRose



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-03-25 08:27 PM



Vague.

Beige.

I know this feeling...
bingo.

Good write, Anne!

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-03-25 09:46 PM


WhiteRose - good write, you're heart speaks out...

BC

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-03-25 09:48 PM


Anne, this is a good write.
Very deep thoughts.  


Heart Hugs  
Ethel

Darkfire k'Sheyna
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4 posted 2003-03-25 10:10 PM


Nice! I like a lot.
-Darkfire-

WhiteRose
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5 posted 2003-03-25 10:13 PM


Karilea, thank you dear poetess, your kind words mean so much. I'm feeling a bit vague these days, and am hoping for a revival of spirit soon.
WhiteRose
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6 posted 2003-03-25 10:14 PM


Bill, thank you for you very kind words.
WhiteRose
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7 posted 2003-03-25 10:15 PM


Ethel, thank you dear lady, I appreciate you giving my poem a read.

I'm in the mood for hugs tonight.


[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-25-2003 10:16 PM).]

WhiteRose
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8 posted 2003-03-25 10:16 PM


Darkfire, I appreciate you reading and responding.
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9 posted 2003-03-25 10:24 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Others may push you around but your determination is the ebb that pulls leeward, make waves with your heart and let those cannonballs that try to take your ship down fade into the oblivious! (sigh) This is powerful, dearest friend, I love your sincerity, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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10 posted 2003-03-25 10:30 PM


Noah, you've no idea how much your words have touched me this day. It's been a long and trying day, and this is just so sweet of you. You are such a dear sweet man. I hope you know how much you are loved in this place.

Thank you, for just being you. You've made this very tired lady, feel very, very good.

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