Open Poetry #25 |
Lost |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I don't want to be lost, placed in mind with those memories you are so close to throwing away. I need the space of same a lack of change I need you to remember more than my name. Lost is not the place for me yet you push, and push continuously, I am slipping into forgotten and I fear becoming vague. WhiteRose |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vague. Beige. I know this feeling... bingo. Good write, Anne! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WhiteRose - good write, you're heart speaks out... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, this is a good write. Very deep thoughts. Heart Hugs Ethel |
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Darkfire k'Sheyna Junior Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 26Maryland, U.S.A. |
Nice! I like a lot. -Darkfire- |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Karilea, thank you dear poetess, your kind words mean so much. I'm feeling a bit vague these days, and am hoping for a revival of spirit soon. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Bill, thank you for you very kind words. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Ethel, thank you dear lady, I appreciate you giving my poem a read. I'm in the mood for hugs tonight. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-25-2003 10:16 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Darkfire, I appreciate you reading and responding. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Others may push you around but your determination is the ebb that pulls leeward, make waves with your heart and let those cannonballs that try to take your ship down fade into the oblivious! (sigh) This is powerful, dearest friend, I love your sincerity, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Noah, you've no idea how much your words have touched me this day. It's been a long and trying day, and this is just so sweet of you. You are such a dear sweet man. I hope you know how much you are loved in this place. Thank you, for just being you. You've made this very tired lady, feel very, very good. |
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