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Open Poetry #25

alone again.............

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

0 posted 2003-03-22 01:18 AM

I hate the fact that your not there
To shelter me when lifes unfair,

You told me that you would never go away,
But now im here, alone to stay,

Why can you just realize?
You being gone, bring my demise.

You seem to have left when i needed you to be here,
But dad your gone away, you left me with her,

Now i love mom in her one special way,
But she can never replace the things we did, everyday,

What can i say to make you come back,
Yelling,laughter, thoses all i can hack,

Just come and make our house a home,
Or just leave me here, consumed in my poem,

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2003-03-22 01:22 AM

What can i say to make you come back,
Yelling,laughter, thoses all i can hack,

Just come and make our house a home,
Or just leave me here, consumed in my poem,

Yes, I know of this. I'm at a loss.

An exceptional, heartbreaking poem.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-22-2003 01:22 AM).]

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

2 posted 2003-03-22 01:27 AM

Nice write Shayne, congrats.

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