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Open Poetry #25

I still love you

P.R.C
Junior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-03-21 04:13 PM

I try to forgive you for the past
But these memories keep coming back, they last
Forever I shall feel the pain of being unloved
You havent broken my heart
Nor have you made the feelings I have for you past
I still love you, I still care
For you, I shall always be there
Yes you have caused me pain
Yes you have made me cry
My heart was already torn
From all the years it has been worn
On my sleeve
I never thought everyone would leave
The sparkle has left my eye
The spring has left my step
The smile has left my face
But the love is still in my heart
The pain started
The day I learnt you didnt care
The day I learnt you wouldnt be there

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-03-21 04:38 PM

Love doesn't disapear with the ending of a relationship. Keep the good memories clsoe to your heart.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-21 04:56 PM

Goodness, there is a lot of pain in this one.
I could feel the hurt. But, like Brad said,
hold on to the good memories that you have.
And good luck....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

3 posted 2003-03-21 05:13 PM

OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This one hit me right where I live. The words you used tell it completely. Thanks.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-03-21 06:35 PM

Nice choice of words...James

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