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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2003-03-21 02:14 PM

Night

The silence of darkness shines with starlight
Nature enjoys a brief moment of rest
Majestic moon is a breathtaking sight

This is the time I always loved best
My mind revels in the soft peace of night
I think of all I have and feel blessed.

"wake me up inside
call my name and save me from the dark"
-Bring Me To Life by Evanescence

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-21-2003 09:24 PM).]

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-03-21 02:16 PM

really enjoyed this!

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-03-21 07:11 PM

sweetly romantic and contemplative

Darkfire k'Sheyna
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since 2003-03-20

Posts 26
Maryland, U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-03-21 07:21 PM

I really like this- it flows very well. Your imagery is quite good, and I like your rhymes. Nice job!!!
-Darkfire-

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2003-03-21 08:04 PM

rosepetals25 - night, my special time for romance, especially in the starlight...

BC

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2003-03-21 09:26 PM

This one is a keeper, Tara. I love it!

hugs

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2003-03-21 09:34 PM

Hi Tara. This is a very
'feel good' and warm poem.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

waldopepper
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since 2003-03-18

Posts 157
Tennessee, USA

7 posted 2003-03-21 09:59 PM

Such a calm serenity in your soft words of night. A stilling effect on the frantic ways of preoccupation. I shall look up in the night sky more often. Thank you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-03-21 10:03 PM

Hi Tara! So nice to see you here tonight..
and such a lovely post!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-03-24 02:16 AM

Tara - this is just lovely - ) I am one with the night . . ) so positive xxoo

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-03-24 06:16 AM

Very, very nice...James

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-03-24 08:24 AM

Thank you for so eloquently writing down how I feel as well...

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

rosepetals25

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12 posted 2003-03-24 10:59 AM

Thank you all so much for stopping in. I am not a rhyming person... so the fact you like it is amazing LOL.

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