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TaureauRouge
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since 2002-06-01

Posts 26
A mass of land between two oceans

0 posted 2003-03-08 02:03 AM

"I am Not a Pebble"

frozen clandestine puddle
topped showing shards of

Stepping high with perfumed
streetwalkers The Poet Supreme

Composes b'attitudes with
slivers of cloudy iceglass

"Despair the artist a pebble
Find him on the Wandering Rocks"

clams clackling softly along the sea bed
with colors of soiled banners

Moon gravity pulls the waves
begging the ignorant

shells closer to tranquility

"I should have been a pair of ragged claws/ Scuttling over the floors of silent seas"-T.S. Eliot

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-03-08 02:04 AM

great imagery in this one! I love the ending!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2003-03-08 03:16 PM

A lovely submission for Reflections, and nice to read (love your name).

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-08 03:49 PM

(sigh) Oh Sean, this is excellent, sweet friend, I am delighted you chose this to submit as it has the classic spirit bleeding through, this has my vote, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sean, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-03-08 04:09 PM

Very very nice...great book submission.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-03-08 06:15 PM

Very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2003-03-09 03:22 PM

This is very soothing...makes me want to sit and stare at the ocean....sigh.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-03-09 05:39 PM

Interesting imagery here, makes me want to pick up a clam shell and ask it a question or two, as I step past quiet pebbles.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-03-10 02:16 AM

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-03-24 10:39 AM

Very nice! Thank you!

Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

10 posted 2003-03-24 10:45 AM

Yes, very nice.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-03-24 10:46 AM

Love your beatitudes! (b'attitudes) Very clever write!

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

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