Stepping Stronger To Surrender

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Open Poetry #25

Stepping Stronger To Surrender

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-21 01:07 PM

Stepping Stronger To Surrender

what stops
our surrender
standing on
the edge of want
what stands
in the way
of touch
wanting
so desperately
to let go
is it just
too many needs
veiled
transparent
thick walls
tight by fear
do we need
that pain-free
guarantee
to lock away past
providing future
to the moving on
and the going on
today
can we
take the time
to go on

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-03-21 01:31 PM

well done!

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2003-03-21 03:35 PM

Can we indeed. An excellent write Helen.

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

3 posted 2003-03-21 05:15 PM

Good question... Can we go on???
Very nicely done.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

4 posted 2003-03-21 06:54 PM

A sweet surrender

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-03-21 10:23 PM

Wonderful!
Eric

Denea Furr
Junior Member

since 2002-11-03

Posts 31
Indiana

6 posted 2003-03-22 05:25 PM

ooh la la!

"What a tangled web we weave, when we practice to decieve."

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

7 posted 2003-03-22 05:38 PM

and we go on..............I think.
Jason

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-03-24 04:14 AM

Helen - the ultimate question here . . . and yes we must - we have to - ver ynice writing - always provoking xxoo

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

9 posted 2003-03-24 01:00 PM

I wish for you a sweet surrender.

Rf

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-03-24 01:02 PM

this touches deeply

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

11 posted 2003-03-25 11:31 AM

PoetFriend1Slick, this is one of my most treasured reads of poetry you've shared here with us...
From start to finish I could feel my heart being tugged and I just want to say to you my compliments2u on yet another fantastic write...
I plan to keep this one in my library for many more reads dearFriend...
Hugs2u
*~coco~*

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