Open Poetry #25 |
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Splat |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Not my usual style, but ill try a crack at a funny. Weve been falling for a long time the bottom's coming soon we may hit pay dirt, this very afternoon Weve been falling for a long time its time to say goodbye to things past and yet to come for now its time to die Weve been falling for so long it seems waking time is very near, from this falling dream Weve been falling for a long time i think ive lost my hat oh no, i see the bottom i believe its time to... SPLAT. |
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j0n4th4n Member
since 2003-03-11
Posts 94 |
funny, clever |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Made me laugh..... It's very cute!!!! Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*giggle* |
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