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Rdz9
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since 2003-03-16
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MT, USA

0 posted 2003-03-20 04:07 PM


Not my usual style, but ill try a crack at a funny.

Weve been falling for a long time
the bottom's coming soon
we may hit pay dirt, this very afternoon

Weve been falling for a long time
its time to say goodbye
to things past and yet to come
for now its time to die

Weve been falling for so long it seems
waking time is very near, from this falling dream

Weve been falling for a long time
i think ive lost my hat
oh no, i see the bottom
i believe its time to... SPLAT.

© Copyright 2003 Rob - All Rights Reserved
j0n4th4n
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since 2003-03-11
Posts 94

1 posted 2003-03-20 04:33 PM


funny, clever
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-04-28 02:48 PM


Made me laugh.....
It's very cute!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-04-29 04:14 AM


*giggle*
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