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ShaolinsOnlyPoet
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since 2003-02-17
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Brooklyn, New York

0 posted 2003-03-20 03:48 PM


How you got through?
How you knew?
Where to touch and hold?
Where to find my soul?
Kissed it
Touched it
Felt it
Embraced it
How did you get past security?
How did you find a way to give me serenity?
You even knew how to calm me
Showed me truth, revealed your reality
I was angry with you
I just don't know how you got through
Tell me
Call me
Please explain
So I won't let you do it again.

Next time you know it's gotta be forever
I want us to be together
I want to hold you
Love you
Tease you
Embrace you
Become one with you

If it's not you I seek
Step up and speak
Let it be known
I can handle it, I'm all grown
After all God has a plan
And I will understand
In the end
I don't want to lose a friend

You see
I'll let you be
Let you see
Me
As I am
Then you too will understand

I saw you run away
I called God, sat down and proceed to pray
A voice within spoke to me
Told me to let you be
Let you come back when you're ready
If ever you decide you were ready
Patiently I wait
For my fate
That option I left for you
You got me doing things I don't usually do
You see, I like you
Not afraid to admit I could even love you
I saw that in your eyes
that day and realized
You're a gift, a true prize

~~::~Candii~::~~

© Copyright 2003 Candii - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-03-20 04:31 PM


Oh wow....this is lovely.
Eric

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-03-20 04:33 PM


This is a very pretty poem. I liked it.
I could feel lots of heart in it.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2003-03-21 07:41 AM


a true prize... hope they realize it...

enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-03-21 07:54 AM


ShaolinsOnlyPoet
A very nice write, enjoyed the read.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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5 posted 2003-03-21 11:43 AM


Your reading my mind here . . .  this - I love:

How did you get past security?
nice job  xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-21-2003 11:43 AM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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6 posted 2003-03-21 01:17 PM


..."how did you get past my security?"--fabulous line!  

Some day he'll realize what a luck man he truly is! ---but he better not wait too long--or another man who is wiser will claim you as his prize!

Peace & Love,
Earth Angel



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