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icequeen
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since 2001-12-09
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0 posted 2003-03-19 10:10 PM



Fresh feeling on my lips
a sensation of being kissed
yet I am alone...

My thoughts are not mine~
they are yours… my name
telepathed by the full moon

Do you also know when
my fingers trace your face?
When I whisper that you,
my love, are mine…
can you hear me?
Do you listen as
your name glides past
on a midnight breeze?

Mile by mile between us
stretched out tight
we are each tethered
to an end

Still, you touch me
enclose me in your
imagination
as in your arms,
and I sleep
with your heart
next to mine

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

© Copyright 2003 Caroline Rush Markham - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-03-19 10:13 PM


This is so romantic. I like the last paragraph of your poem. Beautiful write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09
Posts 633
FL USA
2 posted 2003-03-19 10:26 PM


Thank you muchly   Jax, huh?  I'm in Lake City. Howdy neighbor!
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-03-19 11:31 PM


This is really beautiful.
I love it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-03-20 08:53 AM


...are you sure the name "icequeen" fits you?!?  

Love & Light,
Earth Angel

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-03-20 09:26 AM


Very very lovely...softly sensual..much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2003-03-20 09:38 AM


Very beautiful, dear icequeen. Stirring!
Love, Margherita

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
7 posted 2003-03-20 11:12 AM




The title drew me in.

I love the poem. Nice concepts!


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
8 posted 2003-03-20 11:32 AM


Nicely done icequeen~
This reminded me of slip stitches sewn into the hearts silver lining.

Lovely writing~


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