Open Poetry #25 |
Telepathy |
icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Fresh feeling on my lips a sensation of being kissed yet I am alone... My thoughts are not mine~ they are yours… my name telepathed by the full moon Do you also know when my fingers trace your face? When I whisper that you, my love, are mine… can you hear me? Do you listen as your name glides past on a midnight breeze? Mile by mile between us stretched out tight we are each tethered to an end Still, you touch me enclose me in your imagination as in your arms, and I sleep with your heart next to mine the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so romantic. I like the last paragraph of your poem. Beautiful write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Thank you muchly Jax, huh? I'm in Lake City. Howdy neighbor! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is really beautiful. I love it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...are you sure the name "icequeen" fits you?!? Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely...softly sensual..much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful, dear icequeen. Stirring! Love, Margherita |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
The title drew me in. I love the poem. Nice concepts! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nicely done icequeen~ This reminded me of slip stitches sewn into the hearts silver lining. Lovely writing~ |
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