Open Poetry #25 |
I Will Not Pretend |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I Will Not Pretend They say that love is in the wind but darling I will not pretend that I love you. For my mind is on other times when I thought a lovely women was mine and I loved her. I'll keep seeing you but to her my heart is true and I won't let her go while I still love her. Even though a mutual love may never flow I don't have the strength to let her go. I love her. I would love to be your friend but darling I will not pretend that I love you. JamesLee March18 2003 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
No pretense but the possibility of love anyway. Beautiful! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And that...is honesty. Good writing, James, thank you. |
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j0n4th4n Member
since 2003-03-11
Posts 94 |
ive felt like this too |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i belive more and more that yes, you can love more than one person in that romantic way, at one time |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Well-said. I like this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You sound like a gentleman! I'd rather have a friend I can trust, than a liar for a lover. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ohhh James this was sad BUT is better to be true to yourself - very nice xxoo |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
It's always best to be honest in matters of the heart. Then there are no misunderstandings later. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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P.R.C Junior Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 40Hull, England |
great write! i think its gr8 that u wont pretend u love someone, cause when they pretend it hurts sooo much when u find out, i found out 2 days ago so i should know, so yay 4 u!! |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
To thine own heart be true, James. Nicely said. the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I always like your poems. You wrapped this one so nicely.. the ending was perfect. I enjoyed. Tara |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, you always write with honesty from your heart. That shows what a caring and honest person you are. "Love makes the world go around" |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Very true, Great poem! |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
hmmm... you sound like a boy i know... appreciate the honesty though... better than lying about your feelings... or not even knowing what they are! |
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