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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-03-19 09:07 PM

I will place within mind
pictures upon finished weave.
Tiny, etched with care,
portraits, and there,
in small of space
events and a trace,
              of loving.

Just something,
a tint, a hint,
around the edge of weave,
                   the tease
of pain. Introduced again
as letters from him,
sent on whim,
        reach my tired soul.

Tears erase the words,
insults not heard, hands
to block out the noise,
to silence the voice.

The weave absorbed,
while I ignored...
the waste of precious breath.
I'm not bereft. In the scheme
you don't even exist,
yet feelings persist,

I will always love you Dad.

WhiteRose 03/19/03

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-19 10:16 PM

Anne, I'm so glad to see you back on here more
often. You always weave and paint your words
of your poetry with excellence. this one is
no exception.

The content of this hurt, though. It has a
sadness about it. Kind of like some confusion.

thanks for sharing with us, friend....

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-19 10:19 PM

Awesome write. I was gonna write something else and then my brain farted and I forgot what I was gonna type. LOL

Cold hands means a warm heart

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

3 posted 2003-03-19 10:25 PM

I will place within mind
pictures upon finished weave.
Tiny, etched with care,
portraits, and there,
in small of space
events and a trace,
of loving.

There is a lot of emotion in this poem. I have read it three times, and its passion does not dim in the re-reading. Brava - it is excellent.

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon