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Window of Life
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Window of Life |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
For some of us our path is clear the window bright, the future so near, the window of life so clean to the eye like staring into the midsummer sky, watching souls play in the ocean of life most without anger, dispair or strife. The window has to cloud sometimes, of course everyone who rides, once falls off their horse. It chips and dents when we hurt and lie making us, our very souls, to cry without the window life is worth little so fragile it is, so simple, so brittle It can be broken, as a promise but when it goes, like a friend you will miss. You may never be able to see it again yet i hope you will some day, my friend. |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
it painted some great pictures, I love it Shayne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! just wonderful! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is beautiful and sad..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are quite an observer of life!--and that is one of the qualities required to make someone into a great writer...keep observing and writing!  Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rdz9, I like the way you write. It feels like it comes straight from your heart, and I like that.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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