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Eromyna
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0 posted 2003-03-13 11:20 AM



Come to me, crying your colors of pain
Recite to me lies of your caullous and rage
Offer your obstacles; throw them away
Cling to me closer, closed into the cage
Overtly observe me, outside of your norm
Dissecting your fancies, dillusional forms
Invert my ideals to invent what you need
Line up the liars to beg at your feet
Empty, eternally; everything is
Tempted to take what you never could give
Each of us equally earning our scorn
As always, arrive at solutions, outworn
Routinely refusing the rights of the soul
Slip slowly, so sweetly, into the black hole

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

© Copyright 2003 Shay D. - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-03-13 11:34 AM


ah slide into that hole one would rather not find... but you describe it well...

I enjoyed

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2003-03-19 06:47 PM


Ok. I like it. It's got a beat almost like a song and you've got a bit of alliteration going on here too. Good job!
icequeen
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3 posted 2003-03-19 07:32 PM


Very cool... I like.
Justbleu
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4 posted 2003-03-19 08:33 PM


Very good!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2003-03-20 07:31 AM


Yes...that is what I meant...nice flow to it.

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Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-03-20 08:58 AM


Another good one!

Love & Light,
Earth Angel


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