Open Poetry #25 |
Crocodile Tears |
Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Come to me, crying your colors of pain Recite to me lies of your caullous and rage Offer your obstacles; throw them away Cling to me closer, closed into the cage Overtly observe me, outside of your norm Dissecting your fancies, dillusional forms Invert my ideals to invent what you need Line up the liars to beg at your feet Empty, eternally; everything is Tempted to take what you never could give Each of us equally earning our scorn As always, arrive at solutions, outworn Routinely refusing the rights of the soul Slip slowly, so sweetly, into the black hole "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah slide into that hole one would rather not find... but you describe it well... I enjoyed |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ok. I like it. It's got a beat almost like a song and you've got a bit of alliteration going on here too. Good job! |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Very cool... I like. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very good!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes...that is what I meant...nice flow to it. M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Another good one! Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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