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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
She liked cotton White And linen Fine. Old-fashioned lace To lie on swell of breast Enticing With poets shirt Veed. I only remember warm days Though the seasons changed And flannel longs Took the place of nude Until the covers Found us both Wrapped in Comfort. We knew soft sunlight Streaming floors With long shadows And evenings Of t-shirt Teasing Always cotton Sheets fine counted threads Numbered our sighs While caressing the bare As we wrote in hieroglyphs On memory Today I stepped from shower Looking for those glyphs Trying to remember What they meant. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write as usual Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW, I love this, the imagery... everything, your word choice. I'm adding YOU to my library. Maree  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This, Sir, came from the cedar chest of  s[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-17-2003 03:58 PM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
That's the way most of the pills I take are described?...Hell, I don't look for what they cure...just what good side effects they may deliver.... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was spell binding. Very well done...saddened at the ending. ThisDiamond |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I cannot possibly respond better than This Diamond did, so read his again!  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Found I was holding my breath as I read...  May we have more please poet sir? YES!! You are in my library! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sheets fine counted threads Numbered our sighs While caressing the bare As we wrote in hieroglyphs On memory Today I stepped from shower Looking for those glyphs Trying to remember What they meant. ========================== you write the ache of recall from places deep..and touch places deep in the reader..that is the gift. seems you a becoming the staple of many a library poet sir... that should tell ya something... ( dont even think about it, I already know what youre gonna say) |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Very hypnotic piece. I was enthraled! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fantastic piece, Ron! Very well expressed! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Soft, this is soft. I picture neutral colors - sand, muslin, earth. But, nearly always, there is sadness to close your poems, dear one. Hmmm, I'm wishing you a Hollywood ending someday. Cor |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"always cotton" "sheets fine counted threads" Have we met? Damn! You sure can write. I know, you just observe.... The two things I love most in life... you put in this poem; cotton and the highest thread count sheets I can afford... Though sad, at least this one didn't make me cry....hardly... Enjoying your poetry tremendously. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I suppose to recognize the glyphics again you just have to read it in a tangible sort of way by feeling deep down to the heart of it! (sigh) Sometimes it can be so exhausting and you wonder if you'll ever feel the same way again, this is very heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
oh, moderator, why does this pass, and i move to the backroom? as usual |
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