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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-17 03:22 PM


Mina of Catalina

I'll never forget
Mina of Catalina.
Her long black
silky hair.

The smell of her
gingerbread cookies
permeating the air.

In her presence
she gave me a feeling
no other woman can provide.

She was a wild
and crazy cowgirl.
She sure knew
how to ride.

JamesLee
February15
2003

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-17 03:27 PM


I really like this a lot.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-02-17 03:28 PM


I really liked your decriptions on this one
Quiet Acquiescence
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somewhere out here
3 posted 2003-02-17 03:28 PM


Beautiful. I can smell the cookies!

~*~me~*~

"Remember, courage is wings."
~*~Heather Francis~*~

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4 posted 2003-02-17 03:45 PM



I really liked this one, James. Well done!
Now go and re-discover that lady.

D.Lester Young
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5 posted 2003-02-17 03:54 PM


A wild ride of beautiful verse.
Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-02-17 03:57 PM


James - a'hhhhh my, Mina of Catalina, must be some kind of woman...

BC

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (02-17-2003 03:57 PM).]

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7 posted 2003-02-17 04:24 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love the romantic and magical feel of this, sweet friend, who could resist such a charm, I can't imagine anyone doing so, this is gorgeous and such sheer beauty has my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-02-17 06:15 PM


Mina sounds like quite the person to meet...
I like the way you captured her for us here.

carol
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9 posted 2003-02-17 06:21 PM


James, this is nice kind of makes you smile

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

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10 posted 2003-02-17 09:56 PM


a nice memory; thanks for sharing.

-majnu
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kaile
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11 posted 2003-02-24 11:55 AM


the last stanza brought me a smile
Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2003-02-24 11:57 AM


LOL nice ride indeed!!!

Susan

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13 posted 2003-02-24 12:12 PM


James, I thought that I had already replied to this...Sorry...
Hugs,
Ethel

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14 posted 2003-02-24 12:39 PM


nice
Enchantress
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15 posted 2003-02-24 01:41 PM


Wow!  She must have been quite the woman James!
~A hugs and a vote~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

bsquirrel
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16 posted 2003-03-04 01:40 PM


Heh. This better make it.
JamesMichael
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17 posted 2003-03-04 03:42 PM


Thank you loner, Brad, Quiet, midnitson, Bill, Noah, Cpat, Carol, majnu, Kaile, Susan, garysgirl, passing shadows, Enchantress and bsquirrel for the nice responses...much appreciated...James
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18 posted 2003-03-20 07:58 AM


Yahoooo!  

Love & Light,
Earth Angel

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19 posted 2003-03-20 07:16 PM


Again, I enjoyed it I have to stop in here more often.. I miss reading you

Tara

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call my name and save me from the dark"
-Bring Me To Life by Evanescence

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