Open Poetry #25 |
Baptism |
Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
After So Long, I too will say goodbye to a life without God, but once the roses thorny arms lift to pray. I know this poem will be so true As God begins to seek my soul. As I begin to walk his waters. Lost but now found. A new person I am. I never knew I could be so wrong, an openning of doors, a new beginning, a forever, when never is present, a never when forever cannot be seen. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I liked the expression of emotion. You got my vote. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kellie, know all our prayers and thoughts are with you, sweet friend, I know many wonderful blessings lie ahead for you and we are all so proud of the strength and courage you display and that is what's going to make you successful in the long run! (sigh) Keep following your heart, for it is the path of least resistance, God Bless You, we all love you so much, you have my vote! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kellie, this is really good, so... Hugs from Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-18-2003 12:58 PM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
This is very heartfelt, very touching. I was baptised as an infant and cried and cried, but I've seen a handful of baptisms preformed on knowing individuals, and it's nice... they seem to enjoy it more than I did. Well written, Kellie. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very good!!!! Bridgette |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Congratulations on your rebirth! It's the dawning of a new day for you! God bless you, Dear Kellie! Love & Light, EA |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Love the message and the poem There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Baptism symbolizes new birth, the new life in Christ... what was once dead is alive again. I love this piece.. I hope it makes it in! Oh, make me Thine forever |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is very beautiful I remember my water baptism well, declaring more firmly then ever the joy in my life and the God I was dependant on. wahoo! hope this gets in. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Beautifully expressed, Kellie. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
perrddyfull.. |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
This was simply beautiful. May God's light continue to shine on you always. Dennis |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kellie, you are a beautiful soul! I was so full of emotion as I read your words, that tears literally welled in my eyes. If you were close by, I'd give you the Biggest Loving Hug imagineable! You are a precious person! God loves you---we all do! You lit up the page with your love, openess, and wisdom. God bless you, Dear One, Welcome home! Sending a rainbow of colored Lights, Earth Angel |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very nicely done indeed. My vote on this one. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Thank You!!! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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