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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-02-18 05:55 PM


Heaven’s tear began to form, swelling in the dream of man
Slipping from the face of God, past stars and dust
into the cosmic span

Seeping through the sands of time, into a bed of stone
Between the coasts, once barren land
The River makes a home

Rf

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-02-18 06:15 PM


now... that is poetry!

excellent... truly...

Robert Frazier
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2 posted 2003-02-18 06:33 PM


CpatHair,  I'm flattered...truly!

Rf

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-03-16 12:48 PM


yes...

went digging in the back pages and found a treasure.

Love this.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-03-16 12:49 PM


wonderful!
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Gaia
5 posted 2003-03-16 02:27 PM


outstanding
keeping this one, thank you for sharing
thank you especially,
for caring

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