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This Symbol of my Mind
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This Symbol of my Mind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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This Symbol of my Mind Part and parcel of the whole It wiggles towards its goal and soul. Surfing in the sifting rhyme A sperm that would alight its time It swims against the rushing tide The only thought to get inside To start the cycle of its life And play a tune upon a fife. Instructed by inherits form It tries it’s best to be the norm Developed from a salty sea That gave it life and liberty. And born within its inner core Previews of the evermore It eats and burns its rind in dwell To add a whisper to the spell From there it goes in flavored wends To make beginnings for new ends |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Instructed by inherits form It tries it’s best to be the norm Developed from a salty sea That gave it life and liberty. And born within its inner core Previews of the evermore It eats and burns its rind in dwell To add a whisper to the spell From there it goes in flavored wends To make beginnings for new ends ====================================== Oh and what I wouldnt give to have a picnic lunch in that mind divine of yours!! We'd snack on symbols and munch on meter LOL For I do so love the way your poetic mind bends the intend of the rhyme.  Have I ever told ya that yer so kool??? *L* How the back today Sy-babers?  *ww*   |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy - You started my day today with a giggle... Thank you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I asked my back and it said, oooo ah ouch so I guess it's the same. Had this once before many years ago and it took a long time to clear. I guess I'll be hobbling for a while. WWRS Nan A giggle is worth it's weight in gold. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thanks for the morning smiles Sy! And, top o' the mornin' to ye laddie! Green tea appropriate? ~Hugs and Smiles~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (03-17-2003 09:33 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Green tea is fine. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Happy St.Patrick's Day to ye Seymour!! Thankyou for this morning's write. I am not sure as to what to serve with Enchantress's tea on this special day.....so whatever your gracious heart desires! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, What ever and thank you, hugs back. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Interesting write, Sy...sorry to hear about your back...I hopep you start to feel better..no Irish jigs today!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Top of the morning to you, Mr. T.! Everybody has a bit of the old Irish in them and this twinkle-in-yer-eye write shows that yours is coming through loud and clear, my Dear! tehe This was brilliant! Totally "brill" as the youngin's say! When I read the title, a star came to my mind as a symbol of your mind!--from now on it will be a sperm cell! tehe Very amusing read, this fine St. Paddy's Day morning!  Sending you an big Irish hug and a tickle! Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio No Irish jiggs today, Maybe a soft shoe. LOL Linda, Thank you for the big Irish Hug, not too hard I'm liable to break LOL. Have a good one. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, from conception to its end this is an amazingly creative write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, sorry to hear about your back. I had a back injury and know how it feels....... Glad it didn't keep you from your delightful rhyme for us today...  Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you and a Happy St Patties day to you. Kethry Thank you my dear, Ethel, Thank you dear and a Happy ST Patties day to you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Everything seems to try, at one thing or another... and you, our very own Sy... become every man's brother... Bless your ever-lovin' for this.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you love, |
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