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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-03-16 09:08 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * * *

Let me take you on a journey
Beyond the blue sapphire sky
We'll leave our troubles far behind
Upon silken wings we'll fly

Let me take you to the mountains
Beside a tranquil flowing stream
Surrounded by nature's beauty
The finest sight you've ever seen

Let me take you to a place
Where love reigns supreme
The kind of place you might find
In your ultimate dream

Let me take you into my heart
Where my feelings are on show
This place says much about me
Can you see love bloom and grow?

Let me take you to the stars
Where we'll enjoy the finest view
As we soar high above the galaxy
I'll declare my love for you

Let me take you into my dreams
Where life goes on without a care
A place of peace and harmony
Let my words take you there

* * * *

"Love alone is capable
of uniting human beings
in such a way as to
complete and fulfil them,
for it alone takes them
and joins them by what
is deepest in themselves."




I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (03-16-2003 09:17 PM).]

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2003-03-16 09:10 PM


Oh Sue, this is just beautiful. In verse and presentation is it just lovely. It gets my vote.
Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-03-16 09:15 PM


So beautiful Sue....one for the book!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2003-03-16 09:56 PM


Sue, both, the picture and poem are so beautiful. This sounds like my kind of journey.
scorpio
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right...there
4 posted 2003-03-16 10:09 PM


A captivating poem Sue...well done..

believe in what your heart feels...

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
5 posted 2003-03-16 10:20 PM


Let me take you to the stars
Where we'll enjoy the finest view
As we soar high above the galaxy
I'll declare my love for you


Everytime you use one of Josephine Wall's paintings, you seem to capture her feelings with your beautiful and romantic words.

I loved the whole poem but really love the above lines.  Nice work Sue.

Huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

Trillium
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6 posted 2003-03-16 10:20 PM


Sue:  A lovely presentation!  I am voting for it.

Betty Lou Hebert

lost_star
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7 posted 2003-03-16 10:48 PM


Great poem, and a really neat picture to match!
garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-03-16 10:54 PM


So very beautiful, Sue....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-03-17 12:15 PM


















(smiles) Yes, love can take us anytime, anywhere and if you always believe in its magic, love will always take you off on its magic carpet ride to bliss! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, you have my wonderland vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton














"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2003-03-17 03:05 AM


you always take me
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
11 posted 2003-03-19 09:29 AM


Enchanting. So vibrant and rich with the meaning of life and love...

Peace & Light,
Linda

deleeme
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12 posted 2003-03-19 10:20 AM


I'm ready to go anytime--sounds so delightful, and you definitely are a charmer with your words.  You've got  my vote!
  david

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

vandana
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13 posted 2003-03-19 06:20 PM


enjoyed  the read
littlewing
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New York
14 posted 2003-03-24 01:01 AM


Sue - you know now I will keep coming back for these *wink*

"Love alone is capable
of uniting human beings
in such a way as to
complete and fulfil them,
for it alone takes them
and joins them by what
is deepest in themselves."

this is lovely - ahhh to fly away on wings . . .  xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-24-2003 01:01 AM).]

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
15 posted 2003-03-24 04:17 PM



WHAT?  I haven't been here yet?  For shame!
HA!  Here now!

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
16 posted 2003-04-17 09:01 AM


Ahhhh.....Very  nice!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Mon Cherie
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17 posted 2003-05-11 07:37 AM


I really enjoyed reading this... It is so beautiful!

"Love alone is capable
of uniting human beings
in such a way as to
complete and fulfil them,
for it alone takes them
and joins them by what
is deepest in themselves."

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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