Open Poetry #25 |
Let My Words Take You There |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * Let me take you on a journey Beyond the blue sapphire sky We'll leave our troubles far behind Upon silken wings we'll fly Let me take you to the mountains Beside a tranquil flowing stream Surrounded by nature's beauty The finest sight you've ever seen Let me take you to a place Where love reigns supreme The kind of place you might find In your ultimate dream Let me take you into my heart Where my feelings are on show This place says much about me Can you see love bloom and grow? Let me take you to the stars Where we'll enjoy the finest view As we soar high above the galaxy I'll declare my love for you Let me take you into my dreams Where life goes on without a care A place of peace and harmony Let my words take you there * * * * "Love alone is capable of uniting human beings in such a way as to complete and fulfil them, for it alone takes them and joins them by what is deepest in themselves." I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (03-16-2003 09:17 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh Sue, this is just beautiful. In verse and presentation is it just lovely. It gets my vote. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful Sue....one for the book! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, both, the picture and poem are so beautiful. This sounds like my kind of journey. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A captivating poem Sue...well done.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Let me take you to the stars Where we'll enjoy the finest view As we soar high above the galaxy I'll declare my love for you Everytime you use one of Josephine Wall's paintings, you seem to capture her feelings with your beautiful and romantic words. I loved the whole poem but really love the above lines. Nice work Sue. Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: A lovely presentation! I am voting for it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Great poem, and a really neat picture to match! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So very beautiful, Sue.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always take me |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchanting. So vibrant and rich with the meaning of life and love... Peace & Light, Linda |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
I'm ready to go anytime--sounds so delightful, and you definitely are a charmer with your words. You've got my vote! david Every Day's a Blessing |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed the read |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue - you know now I will keep coming back for these *wink* "Love alone is capable of uniting human beings in such a way as to complete and fulfil them, for it alone takes them and joins them by what is deepest in themselves." this is lovely - ahhh to fly away on wings . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-24-2003 01:01 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
WHAT? I haven't been here yet? For shame! HA! Here now! Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ahhhh.....Very nice!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I really enjoyed reading this... It is so beautiful! "Love alone is capable of uniting human beings in such a way as to complete and fulfil them, for it alone takes them and joins them by what is deepest in themselves." _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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