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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-16 06:22 PM



Tragedy

of all
the things
you love
you hate
to see
the truth

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
GG
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Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-02-16 06:25 PM


conviction hurts
too true.
Well done!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-02-16 06:27 PM


for all
things said
often have no resemblence
to the ones
unsaid

truth is like
that sometimes....

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-02-16 06:37 PM


helen - I just knew someone like that...

BC

Sven
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4 posted 2003-02-16 07:04 PM


well said. . . much here for the mind. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

sellout007
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5 posted 2003-02-16 10:29 PM


I love how you say so much with so little.

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-02-20 04:52 AM


don'cha know it!
Ericc
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7 posted 2003-02-20 08:27 AM


Always so much wisdom cloaked within the beauty of your words.
Thanks,
Eric

bslicker
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state of mind
8 posted 2003-02-20 11:04 AM


Saw it
and now
even to late
know the truth..

Janette
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9 posted 2003-05-11 05:07 AM


I know of a man who is like this, too.

LIES ... my one unforgivable sin!

Great write here, Lady!

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