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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-03-16 06:03 PM


Love Me

At one time
I was so crazy
about Lena
that I bought her
a diamond ring.

She loved the way
it looked on
her finger.
But she never
did love me.

She kept the diamond ring.
She got rid of me.

JamesLee
March16
2003



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-03-16 06:53 PM



You do meet the most fickle of women, James...
But I enjoyed the read...simply because each
time I come in, there's always one more
conquest, met...

    Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-03-16 07:56 PM


Thanks Sunshine.
Should she give me the ring back?
Yes or no...James

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2003-03-16 09:43 PM


A sad lesson James...but a great poem..

believe in what your heart feels...

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4 posted 2003-03-16 09:44 PM


James, you have said aloud that to which all men can relate. Just remember... it was her loss.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-03-16 09:48 PM


Gee...did she keep the ring?
Good write James.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-03-16 09:54 PM


James, if I had been her, I would
have given the ring back. Now, if you
had gotten rid of her, instead of
the other way around, it would be a
different story.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-03-16 11:15 PM


James - fel this one OUCH - go get that ring back  . . .  xxoo
Silver_Tryst
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8 posted 2003-03-17 12:24 PM


im sorry things went that way, it should always be about love, not money

Shayne

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displaced
9 posted 2003-03-17 03:02 AM


that's how it goes...lesson learned I hope?
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